Comic 12 - Obligatory House Reference

27th Nov 2009, 5:22 AM
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Obligatory House Reference
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27th Nov 2009, 5:49 AM
YAYYYY glad to see you back :)
27th Nov 2009, 6:04 AM
has potential, reading it i did find it amusing but there was too much missing so it was rather confusing because it seemed to jump from one thing to the next. like they went to see about getting a room at with(not sure her name) and then they were living there with out any sure you can live here/moving in, then there was the more recent I need a drink/introducing new char without actually introducing them. where did she meet him, why did she think he was a girl, it was never indicated that she liked girls and not guys before this point, who is this new person?


in short, expand more on each bit, try not to jump right from one thing to the next, go slow fill in the blanks and plot holes and you should have a very good comic
1st Sep 2010, 9:44 AM
rosha11
House xD